Qing Fei! I thought this blog thoroughly represented all of the ideas that we have spoken about in class thus far, so good job! :)
Not only did it represent those ideas well, but it also covered all the issues that Mr. Darcy referenced in his letter to Elizabeth. By having Elizabeth deny the proposal, I think Qing Fei accurately displayed the characteristics that we have seen Elizabeth display. I also liked how she made it clear that Elizabeth feels strongly about her sister, which justifies why she was so upset that he succeeded in breaking up her relationship with Mr. Bingley. Overall, I really liked the content of this letter but there are some language adjustments that could be made. If different word choices were used, in order to make the letter sound like it was straight out of the book, this letter would be very quality work :) Good job Qing Fei!
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