Writing Critique #8

Sarah's letter was very unique in that she made what she expects to happen later in the novel very clear. The letter showed that Elizabeth simply wanted Mr. Darcy to accept her apology and offer his hand in marriage yet again. Sarah also very successfully shows how Elizabeth's point of view on Darcy had changed up to this point, proving that she may not be as prejudice as some would think. This is a very apologetic and genuine letter, which only made me like it even more. Lastly, the ending was very cute and definitive, clearly stating that Elizabeth has changed her mind and would like to now accept Mr. Darcy's hand in marriage. I like the confidence that Sarah's stating this shows, and to be honest, I hope this happens in the book. Woo hoo happy endings! Overall, it was hard for me to find much wrong with this letter, good job Sarah :)