Writing Critique #7

In Dasomi's blog, I really liked how she represented Elizabeth. She made it clear that it was an apologetic letter, but not with a begging tone. Her letter keeps a very consistent honest tone, which is somewhat how I would imagine Elizabeth speaking. She also succeeded in making Elizabeth's feelings of closeness with Jane clear. Dasomi uses a very wide display of vocabulary, which keeps me interested throughout the letter. In the end, I liked how she left me wondering. She didn't specify whether or not Elizabeth now wanted to accept his hand in marriage, but she made it clear that she did not want things to end. Good job Dasomi :)